Personification and hyperbole

Personification gives a thing, an animal or an idea human actions or feelings: ⟦The wind whispered through the trees.⟧ Hyperbole is a huge exaggeration that nobody takes literally: ⟦I've told you a million times!⟧ Both make writing more vivid.

Key facts

  • Personification: a thing does something only a person can do: ⟦The sun smiled.⟧ ⟦The old door groaned.⟧ ⟦The stars winked.⟧
  • Personification helps the reader picture a scene and feel its mood: ⟦The angry sea⟧ sounds dangerous; ⟦The leaves danced⟧ sounds happy.
  • Hyperbole: an exaggeration for effect: ⟦This bag weighs a ton.⟧ ⟦I'm so hungry I could eat a horse.⟧ It means ⟦very heavy⟧, ⟦very hungry⟧.
  • Hyperbole shows strong feelings or makes something funny or dramatic. People use it all the time in speech: ⟦We waited for ages.⟧
  • Don't mix them up with a simile, which compares using ⟦like⟧ or ⟦as⟧: ⟦The lake was like a mirror.⟧

Worked examples

Example 1

Which word makes this personification? ⟦The thunder grumbled in the distance.⟧

  1. People grumble when they complain.
  2. Thunder can't really grumble: ⟦grumbled⟧ is the personification.

Answer: ⟦grumbled⟧

Example 2

What does it really mean? ⟦My brother takes a hundred years in the shower.⟧

  1. Nobody spends a hundred years in the shower.
  2. It means he takes a very long time.

Answer: My brother spends a long time in the shower.

Example 3

Personification or hyperbole? ⟦The city never sleeps.⟧

  1. Sleeping is something people do.
  2. The city is given a human action, so it is personification.

Answer: personification